Tuesday, 13 October 2015
Your Adaptable Mind - Response
After viewing the short video Mr.Macpherson presented to us "The Adaptable Mind", I figured I had a couple of the traits they mentioned that a person should have in order to be successful. I am curious. I am eager to know anything interesting, especially what happens around the world because, I learn from it for example the issues going on in my country of origin, The Democratic Republic of the Congo. I have initiative on a daily basis. I am motivated by school because it's a place that will help me get better if I fail at doing something. It will motivate me to do better the next time in order to have a better grade. My parents motivate me because even though they built a great home for us and drive around with nice cars, they want us to have the initiative to do better than they did so that we can provide a better life for our children one day. I will continue to carry those traits along the way to be a successful person.
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I glad you got this caught up, but it seems a bit rushed. An image adds a lot, and you have not really answered the question fully. I asks what you will do to develop the traits you do not yet have. Some technical items to fix;
ReplyDeleteI am curious. I am... period after complete thought
I have initiative on a daily basis. I am... period after a complete thought
and also my parents - new sentence My parents also motivate me...